Writing a letter from father informing him results in the annual examination

A letter from a son/daughter to his/her father informing him of his/her results in the annual examination.

January 10, 2015 
House-23, Road-9, Block-c 
Mirpur-11, Dhaka

My dear Father, 
Yesterday I received your letter asking about the results of my annual examination of class VIII. I have been awaiting the results and just today they have been out. 

Father, you all will be glad to learn that I have stood third in the examination. I have obtained letter marks in mathematics, science, and English. My total marks are 768. My teachers are very satisfied with the results. Here my friends and relatives have congratulated me on my good position. I send you a copy of my mark-sheet. 

But I have the determination to do much better the next year. For this, I will leave no stone unturned.

I am well here. Dying my Ramajan holidays I have decided to visit you. Convey my best regards to mother. 

Your loving son,